[翻译交流]帮朋友泡日本妞,请大家帮忙!

楼主:jroclee 时间:2004-08-13 10:03:00 北京 点击:1903 回复:29
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看看俺的翻译(中翻英)有哪些不对之处!敬请高手指正!谢谢!
  
  富山静子:
  
  You said you like me that day. I’m so happy! That I forget ask your adress, phone number and the time you return. Cause I’ve never heard such words ---- a girl tell me she like me . I regret about that, really.
  那天你对我说你喜欢我,我心里特别的高兴。因为从来都没有一个女孩对我说过喜欢我。当时我高兴的都忘记了问你的地址、电话和回国的时间,我非常的后悔。
  
  I chased all over looking for you after you photoed with me and left. But you’ve departed from me far away. That night, I looked for many places and people hope to get your time-leaving and the place-leaving, cause I wanna accompany you to the airport. I really wanna to the airport see you, but I didn’t. So , I can’t keep my mind on everthing up to now.
  当你和我合影完走后,我出去追你的时候,你已经走远了。当天晚上,我找了好多的地方,希望能知道你走的时间和地点,因为我想去机场送你,我真的好想到机场送你。但我没有做到,我的心里一直无法平静。
  
  Maybe I can’t have more with you. I just a boy who no money and much education with. That is, a layfolk. But you have hold me in my mind since I met you.
  我不期望能和你有更深的感情,因为我只是一个没有钱,没有太多文化的普通中国男孩。虽然我俩只见过几次面,但是你在我心里已经有了很重要的位置。
  
  I’m very desired and I really thirst for meet you, but I can’t …
  I wanna see the photo you and me. And I believe we’ll be together someday. I start learning Japanese from now no. I’ll go to Japan when I can talk with you in Japanese, and when I have enough money. Trust me! That will be.
  Because I love you!
  我多希望能再见到你,可现在……。我很想看到我俩的照片,我相信有一天我们还会见面的,我现在开始学日语,等到我学会了日语和有了一定的经济实力,我会到日本去看你,相信我!一定会的,因为我也喜欢你。
  
  Name: Xu jun xiang
  Birthday: 1982.7.5
  Born year: Dog
  姓名:许军祥
  生日:1982.7.5
  生肖:狗
  

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作者:故人情重 时间:2004-08-13 10:20:17
  粗看了一下,很多地方需要修改
作者:OoUFOoO 时间:2004-08-13 10:25:59
  很多地方都错了
  
  
楼主jroclee 时间:2004-08-13 11:06:09
  
  
  作者:故人情重 回复日期:2004-8-13 10:20:17 
    粗看了一下,很多地方需要修改
  
  
  作者:OoUFOoO 回复日期:2004-8-13 10:25:59 
    很多地方都错了
  
  我晕~ 赶紧帮忙指出来呀!我发这贴子干嘛呀!不就是为了你们的指正嘛!!!
作者:社会闲人 时间:2004-08-13 11:58:59
  不要改了,日本人英语很烂的,这样她就能看懂了。
作者:米饭团团 时间:2004-08-13 12:15:12
  居然喜欢日本妞.
  
  眼光太蛙了..
  
  
作者:po_po72 时间:2004-08-14 06:15:58
  刚看了开头 地址的单词都写错了 呵呵呵
作者:fantom3 时间:2004-08-14 10:08:03
  恶恶恶
作者:bonhomie 时间:2004-08-14 11:41:08
  xuxu ~~~日本女人泡完甩不掉,小心玩吧
作者:奇巧 时间:2004-08-14 11:43:51
  作者:社会闲人 回复日期:2004-8-13 11:58:59 
    不要改了,日本人英语很烂的,这样她就能看懂了。
  -------------------------------------------------------
  
  严重同意!放心吧您就!日本太很爱装,不懂也会跟你はい、はい的
  
  
  TO:楼主
  生日:1982.7.5
  me2
作者:xindijingying 时间:2004-08-14 16:31:10
  祝楼主好运,我也想泡个日本妞,羡慕!
作者:14ET 时间:2004-08-14 17:06:43
  改什么?标准的日本英语
作者:紫萌儿 时间:2004-08-14 18:01:38
  一定要改~~~让日本人看出来了会笑话我们中国人英语差劲的~.....
  
  一定要一点错误也不要留...........
  
  
作者:波浪卷发 时间:2004-08-14 18:27:57
  日本女人???
作者:csldlhp 时间:2004-08-14 19:14:54
  !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
作者:kevinsuper 时间:2004-08-14 23:57:57
  哈哈,有意思~~~除了第一句是you打头,其他都是i打头的~~~初中水平吧,高中都比他的好一些~~~
  
  不过,我想对方能看懂什么意思的,鼓起勇气追吧,我也喜欢过日本人,毕竟比较体贴和顾家啊~~~
作者:Frankly 时间:2004-08-15 01:10:50
  I am very happy for you said you like me. There have no any girl ever told me of that. And I was so blithe that I forgot asking your address, telephone number and the time when you go back. I am regret about that. On that day, after we took a group photo and you went away, I chased you but failed. Later at that night, I search for many places with the hope to find you and know when and where you left China. I just want to see you off, I do really want to see you off at the airport. But, I failed to do so and I could hardly calm down. I dare not expect further emotion we could have since I am only a common Chinese boy without money and without much literacy. Although we met several times, you had dominated my heart.
  I am looking forward to seeing you again. I always gazed at the picture with us on it, believing that we will meet one day. Currently I begin to learn Japanese. I will go to Japanese to find you when I know Japanese and have enough money. I promise, I will. Because I like you too.
作者:拖鞋在流泪 时间:2004-08-15 01:19:52
  泡日本妞好啊,可以在日本妞身上宏扬中国人的气概
作者:土地测量员K 时间:2004-08-15 04:44:23
  泡到了一定要发可死她,替国人报酬啊兄弟,任务艰巨!:)
作者:火柴棒酷 时间:2004-08-15 10:03:33
  you like me !
作者:mimiking 时间:2004-08-15 10:53:53
  有的句子连谓语动词都没有啊!!!
  
  动词不定式也不对!
  
  中国这么多好姑娘不要,要日本妞!
  
  要全面抵制日货!!
  
  实在要追也要学好日文再说啊!
作者:1995年夏天 时间:2004-08-15 11:16:51
  世界本来就太复杂啦,请给感情世界一个纯真的环境好吗?不管是日本女人还是中国女人,都是有感情的人类.对吗?
  何况人家在讨论英语问题呢,这是重点
  
作者:月影06932 时间:2004-08-15 12:06:25
  是谁人啊?要日本的?
作者:xiademiao 时间:2004-08-15 13:04:56
  up
作者:somedaNcing 时间:2004-08-15 18:01:07
  要全面抵制日货!!//// 哈哈哈哈
  
作者:鬼诸 时间:2004-08-15 22:35:56
  Frankly这篇太正式了,表达不出初动情男生的青涩味。楼主那篇比较自然,即使有不少错误,但没关系嘛,反下两个都不是英美人。
楼主jroclee 时间:2004-08-15 22:53:05
  嘿嘿~ 同意楼上!一、俺确实没有正式学过英文。俺高中毕业,后来学的自考。而且上高中时英语课从来没听过,一般考试就是拿个十几分的水平,还多亏是标准化试卷,要不这十几分估计也很难拿到手所以语法知识基本上属于模糊状态;二、本身这篇文字的汉语就不太利索,所以,俺也就照葫芦画瓢了。
作者:幻想与劳瑞德 时间:2004-08-15 23:04:37
  没关系,日本人英文保准比你差~~
作者:姬绛雪 时间:2004-08-15 23:40:08
  上次看一个笑话,日本人说英语“Chinese”是“踹你死”,“China”是“拆哪”(拆哪都好,就是别拆我家......)。所以说,天不怕,地不怕,就怕日本人说英国话。

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